Your rhyme-scheme is good, but you're missing a few components

from Childish Gambino (Ft. Regular Show & Tyler The Creator) – Regular Show "Rap It Up" Lyrics on Rap Genius

Meaning

They are great rappers, but it’s not as good as Pops would like.

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