"Excuse the endurance miss, this critic thing is new to me" (Earl Sweatshirt – Dat Ass) | rejected

“Excuse the endurance miss this critic thing is new to me” it’s also a double entendre because “excuse the endurance miss” could also be perceived as sexual.

"I hate it when you think you really getting something goo..." (Childish Gambino – The Longest Text Message) | accepted

“I hate it when you think you really getting something good”

"Him without a win is Clark Kent without a cleft chin" (Earl Sweatshirt – Molliwopped) | accepted

“Him without a win is Clark Kent without a cleft chin” not winner, it doesn’t flow.

"Life is but a beach chair beach nigga's folding" (Earl Sweatshirt – Molliwopped) | rejected

“Life is but a beach chair, beach nigga’s folding” as in “bitch nigga’s” saying other rappers are bitches