Is My Rap Decent?

https://soundcloud.com/icekrunk/you-aint-you

sound cloud must’ve f'ed up

January 6th, 2013
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Lol. You could try to speak a little more loudly. Sounds like you’re trying to keep it quiet, can’t hear much.

July 13th, 2013
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it sounds like you’re talking into vacuums bruh

try and work on production and shit and get a handle on that

July 13th, 2013

Do you really believe this is a masterpiece? Or do you just make songs to keep up your appearance, while struggling with intense rap depression?

July 13th, 2013

Your voice isn’t that great, your flow is bad.

You need to find a place whether its an abandonded house, the woods or some shit to just go and freestyle and not worry about the people in your house hearing, which is obviously a prob for you since ur 14 or 15

July 13th, 2013

Vocals are buried in the mix, but has a nice sortof emo rap vibe to it. Solid 4/10 but if you practice it could be something. I feel like your voice is unique but your flow could be tighter. Please don’t take this the wrong way. By all accounts I am weak sauce as a rapper! I like the synth a lot.

July 13th, 2013
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6 month old thread.

People replying as if OP just posted it

July 13th, 2013