A Short Story (Prod. By Madd Dogg) Feedback please

http://soundcloud.com/madd_dogg/madd-dogg-a-short-story

Tell me what’s wrong so I fix em.

August 14th, 2011
Devires's photo

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Feels like something Nas would rhyme over. Simple, I like it. Did you use a sample?

August 14th, 2011
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Great, sounds dark, gloomy, something that Tyler the Creator would do

August 14th, 2011

TThanks guys

@Devires No. Make it from scratch

August 14th, 2011

It’s pretty good, but you definitely need to add more. Something needs to be going on in the beat instead of the same thing the whole time. Maybe add some drops and change it up a bit? Change the tempo? Something to give it some life so it keeps the listener interested, also if you’re planning on rapping over it, changing it up will let you switch styles during your rap, which sounds awesome.

August 15th, 2011

Of course I’m rapping over it :D

http://soundcloud.com/madd_dogg/a-short-story

Reuploaded without the sax in the background…sucked

When we rap over it I’ll change it and adapt to the style we do it

August 15th, 2011