8 Bars and running? A small Rap Forum battle or message?

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So read this… its just for fun just 8 bars of what ever you want
Haters can hate and guys can help each other in their rhymes.

just eight bars thumbs up if you like and well if you don’t then… thumbs up cus he tried.

ill start obviously and note… i have never written before its just this rapgenious setup that makes me think i am pac. Parenthesis may be put in the rhyme to tell the reader where to take a breathe so he can read it with some flow.

So i get eight lines to elevate my rate.
seven left to rearrange my fate
6 to see my fellow writers relate
but dont forget rap genius is full of trollers that hate.

While we in a recession the work on hating is great
And their working hard (small pause) including after hours is late…
late to quit like mr San—-to—-rum
they think they can create post mortum on a damn forum.

well guys show some knowledge or constructive criticism but if you don’t write you cant criticize.

PAC THANKING GOD HE DEAD SO HE COULD NOT READ THIS POS.

April 9th, 2012

8 BARS OF TRUTH

I tried to tell these mf the truth
Then they turn round nd give out negative IQ
I said I hate Nas and Love Wayne to fullest
and just with real words I blew it
Now these niggas on Rap genius all i hate me
escape me and they try and rate me
saying i aint aint shit just another account
and that my opinion doesn’t fucking count

April 9th, 2012

oops made some errors

take out “i” on the fifth bar
And take out the second aint on the seventh bar

LOL

April 9th, 2012
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very nice and sooooo true.

April 9th, 2012
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Im the one an you know that too
Since three ive been down for my crew
watching gangs throw up 5’s and 6's
driving in benzes, wearing expensive 7’s (jordans)
the drugs were bait (b-eight), conceal the nine
while we pick up the drugs, better have every dime (10)
seemed god and the devil were versing one on one, true (11)
that when i copped the bricks, i kept one and gave Juan (one) too (12)

thumbs???

April 9th, 2012
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They give you the thumbs down like gladiators at a Co lo sseum
And think the thumbs up is a painting in a museum
these kids love to hate behind an anonymous name
they were the kind kids who got bullied and just whined and complained

they think getting those iq numbers are goin to help rm get paid
its easier for a redneck to get in a mob and get made
than the trollers in rap genius to smell some pussy and get laid.
so i hope you cool down and like sean paul dye out and just fade.

April 9th, 2012

From something I’m cookin up later…

Drip words like a hoochie mama’s hot flow
Contagious, causing trauma at grottos
Make drama, clock foes and mock hoes
Might float high, could follow the flock low
But still the great white hope
Facebook shows Jaws with Obama mottos
Hoping phat rhymes bloating that guy
Till I blow as if I won Osama’s lotto

April 9th, 2012

Lol @FT4L

April 9th, 2012
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thumbed up silky after i read it with difffffffffffffferentes styles and found one that made it flow out.

April 9th, 2012
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lol got a thumbs down in half a second i swear that kid went to school with me and i
Slapped him a few times and now he is after me haha

April 9th, 2012

You got two thumbs down because I liked it

April 9th, 2012

and in order for it to be a negative one two people had to dislike it.

April 9th, 2012
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lol hahaha

April 9th, 2012
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lol. i thumb’d it up too. this is an epidemic.

April 9th, 2012
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they are mad cus i told em they wont be able to elope haha

April 9th, 2012