My Til Infinity Remix (Back to the forum)

http://soundcloud.com/j-o-fasle/til-infinity-3 Please give feed back

Dope!

Thanks me

THANKS BRO

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^ Not this Facebook shit

I rap for fun, and I think I’m alright but I want to know other people’s opinions about my rapping ability. How good do you think this verse is?

I write stories and hope they inspire like Lin's
Crowd so loud can’t hear the drop of a trillion pins
I won’t stop till I, till I get a million spins
Till I’m a legendary giant like Phil Simms
Freestyle not off the dome but it’s from the heart
So you feel it and get chills right from the start
So I’m ill and they want to give me a pill
But no I won’t give in cause that’s what sets me apart from these
Rappers, that think backwards, no dope flows
Way, more focused on how the neck glows
I’m way more focused on all my next goals
They all, don’t, want to be exposed
That’s too late for me cause what you see is what you get
Like a house auction the others eBay
I stay ready to pay the price if my name’s called
I’ve played with my own share of dice, but I still balled
Yeah I still balled, yeah I still balled

j.cole killed this beat, but this was pretty dope too

Thank you

Dat shit crack

Is that good

Lemme rephrase. This is good.