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Make sure you have an organized outline/timetable for creating your tape. We all know what happens to mixtapes that weren’t organized and executed well…cough RG mixtape

June 28th, 2013

Your annunciation and your presence comes off as cheesy at times.

You mean stop pronouncing every word as if I was having a conversation with someone right?

June 28th, 2013

Yes, that’s a part of it.
In the intro when you drop adlibs, they seem off-beat.
Which feels awkward imo.

When you’re finishing punchlines and bars, you say them in way that almost sounds like you’re going to keep going.

Lastly your voice needs a bit more “umph”. I hear what you’re saying, but I can’t really feel the passion from you.

June 28th, 2013

I fell in love with this girl at Disneyland and finally found my rap style.

June 29th, 2013

^Song concept?

June 29th, 2013