Actual lyricism

it seems like nowadays in rap no one puts any effort into their lyrics and everyone raps the same basic shit, thats so wack imo so i actually lyrically go in im bringing lyricism back and talent back, check
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/static-shock http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/pokey-oaks http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9KFgVtNXS9w

2 tracks off an EP im working on and a freeverse

rap is so boring right now and im trying to make shit interesting even tho it may be nerdy and weird i still believe im more talented than most.

http://yellow-stuff.com

June 28th, 2012
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You are saying that rap is boring, but you post 3 boring ass tracks.. mindfucked

June 28th, 2012

you listened to all 3 that fast? you must be a superhero man

June 28th, 2012

No, he was bored as fuck by all 3 that fast.

June 28th, 2012
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Fred J is the saviour of hip-hop

June 28th, 2012

I feel like I just got RICKED ROLLED!!!
Well, Rick Astley is more entertaining!

June 28th, 2012

LOL you came in here barking way too loud.

June 28th, 2012

rick astley comparison means i must be god :D
Hey its better than YG’s entire discography lol

June 28th, 2012
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Your talent doesn’t measure up with your ego. Real talk, dawg.

June 28th, 2012

^you know what you’re kinda right but i feel like the fact that i have lyrical talent , i make my own beats and artwork, and im original already puts me ahead of most. but if your looking for cool guy weed, money bitches rap…this isnt it and your probably gonna hate this but its all cool i appreciate everyone who listened to it…and all the hoes who get loose on trains in Japan

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Do you know what forums you’re on? Every rapper on here is a lyricist lol, nice try tho.

June 28th, 2012

“it seems like nowadays in rap no one puts any effort into their lyrics and everyone raps the same basic shit”

Coming to this website saying this is a bad idea. If anything, lyrics are probably the most important component of rap to this site and the people on it. That being said, your lyrics are ok and I fuck with that Pokemon R/B/Y Champion theme sample on the second song but the other two songs were a bit boring.

June 28th, 2012
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I clicked on this topic 2 hours ago and just woke up.

June 28th, 2012

Your cocky as fuck. Come back with a more humble attitude.

June 28th, 2012