@TheEminem lol! You stannin' kids since ‘02? I wonder if you part of the reason as to why people like Weezy is still hitting the charts when he should be fallin’ under.
ANYWAY Kamy, you’re music, at least, the two beats for the two songs you posted, remind a lot of the song Infinite, you should try to use different kinds of beats, get a bit complex. I DO like the complex multi-syllables, that’s just me. I find if someone is able to consecutively and accurately tell a story or something using a series of multi-syllable rhymes without having to throw in plain words in between, really sick. That’s just my opinion, however, you are what? 15 is what you and others said, right? I think you have potential, not saying you don’t, but I feel at age 15, you probably don’t have enough things to rap about from your own experience to really go anywhere with. As for now, if I were you, I’d focus on school, stop worrying about rap for now, wait till maybe after school, and then go and try to pick up rap and go with your story from there. However, that’s just my opinion, I do like the sick multi’s, I don’t like how the beats are the same for both these songs, I do think you have potential, I don’t think you have enough to rap about at your current age. For now, put the mic down, go focus on school, come back in 5 or so years, and then really tell your story, your struggles and see where it gets you. You know what I mean? Also, you’re flow and delivery could use a BIT of work, maybe focus on that while taking a bit of a break and really developing a story for you to come back. You follow what I’m saying man?